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Soooo.... :iconcrossing-ariel: did a Found Poem, as seen here:

Found Poem 1 - Layers of Theater by crossing-ariel

Then, that sneaky :iconvespera: got cute and did one of her own from the next pages of the book. Hers is here:



Then what happened? The smart alecs told me to play. So I was sent the pages and I, of course, being the least mature of our little group made mine tacky. Let's see if they invite me to play any more. ;) Oh, and apologies for mine being kinda blurry. I had to take this with my phone. :roll:

The wordies to mine:
the girl,
concealed partially,
dances
for a long while;
a brass pole
in the center of the room;
a smooth squared
polished floor

s-shaped
...and on and on,
well-oiled, easily sliding

all the people
red-faced, slouched
sip their drinks
sitting on the
strange plush couches

she looks up
frightened by the sight
his quivering;
a rising core
thickening

crudities

she stood there motionless;
solicitously,
the girl closed the door
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The words on the page were really hard to follow for me so I just ended up reading 'em in the artist's comment and dang. This is so dirty but so well-worded and it reads so well, it might not have been a found poem at all. I'm just :jawdrop: