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Soooo.... did a Found Poem, as seen here:
Then, that sneaky got cute and did one of her own from the next pages of the book. Hers is here:
Then what happened? The smart alecs told me to play. So I was sent the pages and I, of course, being the least mature of our little group made mine tacky. Let's see if they invite me to play any more. Oh, and apologies for mine being kinda blurry. I had to take this with my phone.
The wordies to mine:
the girl,
concealed partially,
dances
for a long while;
a brass pole
in the center of the room;
a smooth squared
polished floor
s-shaped
...and on and on,
well-oiled, easily sliding
all the people
red-faced, slouched
sip their drinks
sitting on the
strange plush couches
she looks up
frightened by the sight
his quivering;
a rising core
thickening
crudities
she stood there motionless;
solicitously,
the girl closed the door
Then, that sneaky got cute and did one of her own from the next pages of the book. Hers is here:
Then what happened? The smart alecs told me to play. So I was sent the pages and I, of course, being the least mature of our little group made mine tacky. Let's see if they invite me to play any more. Oh, and apologies for mine being kinda blurry. I had to take this with my phone.
The wordies to mine:
the girl,
concealed partially,
dances
for a long while;
a brass pole
in the center of the room;
a smooth squared
polished floor
s-shaped
...and on and on,
well-oiled, easily sliding
all the people
red-faced, slouched
sip their drinks
sitting on the
strange plush couches
she looks up
frightened by the sight
his quivering;
a rising core
thickening
crudities
she stood there motionless;
solicitously,
the girl closed the door
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The words on the page were really hard to follow for me so I just ended up reading 'em in the artist's comment and dang. This is so dirty but so well-worded and it reads so well, it might not have been a found poem at all. I'm just