Who do we have to blame for this? None other than this rascal: who gave me the prompt: dinosaurs were feathered like a peacock a while back. Yeah, really, that's what he gave me. And yes, really, that is why you read this. Boom. Prompts are evil. (:
Now this is an interesting and very unique story of a romance. I like it. I like your Southern twang, and how it infuses your writing. It makes the stories you tell seem more intriguing for some reason.
Aww, this is really awesome. I love love love what came out of that prompt. You painted such a vivid atmosphere, and the wry but nostalgic tone is really appealing and kind of funny.
I laughed out loud, literal LOL, at "Tyrone". hahahaha! But you called him Tyler. I thought that was hilarious, especially because I thought it was true. lol
Great job!