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Lonely and hollow, she follows
she follows her heart's pattern
walking in darkness
lit by imagination's lantern.

Unsure and curious, she reaches
she reaches for the meaning of things
nothing to lead her
following only the map her thought brings.

Strong and intelligent, she challenges
she challenges her own fear
with the help of no one
she fights to keep what she holds dear.

Determined and able, she searches
she searches to find her way
destined to find herself
so in her mind she can stay.
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Hey what's this about?

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Goobers, Goobers Everywhere
Not a spot to think!
Self-discovery, lol. Idk, nothing really in particular. I was just randomly writing today. This was the least lame of the two that I wrote... I don't really like it, but I thought I'd post for the heck of it.

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Vedder makes everything better...
Ok well I wasn't feeling the "with the help of no one" line, lol. Quit it...you're making Todd feel like a dirty ho. I love Hoser.

J/K...I understand what it meant I think.

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Goobers, Goobers Everywhere
Not a spot to think!
Eh...the meaning isn't that important on this one anyway, lol. This was a boredom special. And I wasn't in love with that line either, it just filled in there as I was writing...idk. AND you are not a dirty ho...I AM the dirty ho!! Get it straight, my dear! Oh, and I love Todd as well.

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Vedder makes everything better...
Very strong poem, god style too, liked this alot.
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God must love idiots, he made so many of them
Thanks...I was very unsure of it. But I appreciate your comments! =)

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Vedder makes everything better...

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